Jhonathan's Treehouse

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        The school  year is about to end. It it flew by like lightning. I wish it would never end , but it will have to. I will miss blogging because of all the stuff  we learned and admired. It was like yesterday that I was writing my first post. That is why I will miss webloging. It helps me a lot in writing. Now I know to make my writing clear and add vivid vocabulary. This is important to me because of all the writing I progressed during the weblog group. Really in my heart I wish weblogs will be in Middle School next year.  

Weblogs This Year

                             In the beginning of the year I didn't like writing. We all ways had to write about what the teacher told us. This was  so boring because I wanted to write about something else. Then Weblogs came. It help me a lot . Now I'm getting to write  whatever I want . We  sometimes write about tips or Current events. Now I can't wait until  I go  to webloggers again. I think a lot of people will have to try weblogging to figure out what I'm saying. This is why I love it  so much. Having a choice makes a big difference,   

C-R-C-T

           Hi. What do you feel about testing? I think it challenges you. Some people  think it is boring. They are also  good things  about it. You do not have any homework after it. You get to go outside or watch a movie.  So next time  you  have a test think of the fun stuff afterwards.

Writing tips

1. Grab the readers attention by your lead. Like The Slimy Story. That will make your reader interested.
2. Use vivid words and phrases. That is like a Ball in football
3. Tell the reader a lot of your post.
4. Muse about what you wrote - I wonder, I think, I wish I knew, I think.
5. Ask  a thought- provoking question
6. To think a catchy title
7. Make a new paragraph if you have a new idea
8. Check Check Check Check it so you don't make  mistakes so they think a grown up wrote it.

     To be contiuned....

The Fantasy

         Two weeks ago we had to write a story. It was about anything we want. I wrote  a fantasy.

           This is the year 5010. Every human has turned into a black,hairy,scary monkey.  I was some how different. Instead of turning into a monkey I turned into a 11 year old child. I looked the same.Since I wasn't a monkey they tried to get me.  I stayed my hole day in a cave with spider webs in it. I hope the monkeys will leave. Day after day I stared outside to what I could of done. Finally one day I had it. I came out of the cave and got  a hole army of butterflies. Of course they have  a army too. We foght day after day. Then it stopped. Guess who won. The monkeys because The butterflies ran to the caves. I just ran. Then I suddenly changed to a monkey.

Revise Tip

This is the first version of my writing tip.

One of the tips is to grab the attention. It helps so the reader will attach to it. Add a idiom or act like your  talking straight to them.This is one of the great tips.

Now this is the revised version of my tips.

Grab the readers attention like a puppy in  a pound. The readers has to attach to  your   post  like a fly. Add   vivid vocabulary to your  post. There's a lot of tips for you to know. This is just one of them.

Around the World in Three Days

     I was looking around  like a fly hunting food to get a story that has organization and word fluency. I guess I found it. The topic was clear and has details . They have used complete  sentences .   They used long and short sentences.                                           

Wow I was like a dog scratching fleas because I heard about this. I heard that a man went around the world in three days. You   also can find this in Time For Kids . This man didn't go to sleep for 67 hours and only  drank  milk shakes! He became the first person to ride solo around the world .   I bet he's going for another super exciting  adventure next. 

Tips

              One of the tips is to grab the attention. It helps so the reader will attach to it. Ad a idiom or act like your  talking strait to them.This is one of the great tips.

Another tip is to have  a good closing. Leave the reader hanged onto there sit. Add a  question at the end so your  reader would understand what you are talking about. Well  I will gave you one more tip, but they are dozens more.

Now here's the last one. Use lots of details. You should inform your reader to what you are talking  about. This would help you a lot with your writing. What tip would you give me?

The Report

I'm here at the weblogers  stion. First up it is the Michle Jackson case. They havn't proven him guilty, but I think he didn't do it. The kid said that Michle Jackson didn't do anything to him. Some of the kids make fun of him for that. They searched his house and they found adult magazines. He showed up two times to court late.        Second up the Nickoles Brian They finaly cought him. he killed three peaple and hold one hostage. A women called the police and they cought him.

Good Tips

This is a great tip from  Tips For Young Writers

Re-write, re-write, re-write. Tear every sentence apart and analyze it. Does it flow? Is it passive or active? The best writers use an active writing voice as much as possible. So instead of saying: “She picked up the pencil,” say instead, “She grabbed the pencil.” Don’t sweat it if it seems to take a century to create something good, that’s how you learn. And with experience the writing process becomes easier. Promise.

   I think this is a great tip. If you analize I bet you  will be better in writing. If it  seems to hard just think how better your writing is going to be. One of my tips is to put your voice into it. You  can put a idiom or something that seems that it is talking to a reader.