My Life as a Weblogger

      Have you ever had a chance to do weblogs? If you haven’t, you should try it out. Ever since I began using weblogs my writing has improved. However, I still need to practice on some things. Punctuation is one that I have mastered. Organization is one that I have not mastered. Figurative language is one of my easiest goals.    Have you ever had a paragraph that doesn’t have a lot of words? I am trying to make all the paragraphs as long as I can, but I always end up with something that seems too minute. The five W’s is one of the problems I have. One of the hardest thing that I hate is that I can’t close a sentence the way I want it to be. Why is it that whenever you want to close a paragraph in an exciting way, you always end up having a sentence that doesn't make sense to you? There are a lot of things that we don't know. Some day everyone's writing will be so perfect that it is sparkling, wait! Actually it will be 100,000 times more shinier than the sun! Do you have any problems that are similar to mine? If not, name some things that you have problems with.

Comments

[Telmo]

picture was great

[Javier]

I really like your story about Nasa.You also drew a good picture.

[ashley]

I usually make mistakes on my spelling and vivid words.

[Marcos]

Dear Alejandro,
I make mistakes on my writing to. I think your writing was aswome. You made a a little grammar mistake on more shinier,you don't use more.

[Shelby]

Your writing made me form a opnion about weblogging. My NEW opnion is that blogging is not just about writing, but it is also about learning.

[Yessenia]

I liked your picture