Two Voice Poem

I thought that writing a two voice poem was incredibly hard. My teacher wanted it to be deep and personal, but I'm not too much of a deep thinker, and I didn't really want to share my personal feelings with the outside world. This is more than I’d normally share, so be nice. These are my two personalities. The red is my “devil” side, and the blue is my “angel” side.

I'm a teacher's worst nightmare

I'm a teacher's dream

I'm bold, loud, and I love to tell jokes

I sit in the quiet company of my friends, usually reading a book

I'm a horrible procrastinator, waiting

for the last minute to finish anything

I promptly finish my work, making sure it's perfect

I'm vulgar, sarcastic, and rude

I'd never dream of saying anything the least bit mean

I'm like my room and my locker-

a total disaster

I make sure every detail is organized, down to the paper being in a neat stack

I have an opinion, and a good bit

of the time, it’s controversial

I never say what I think, because I know it never ends well

I sit on her left shoulder, whispering

what I think she should do with

a mischievous grin

I sit on her right shoulder, telling her to do the right thing

I was born from her rebellious side

I was raised her entire life, told to be perfect

I’m the personality she shares

with her friends and at home

I’m the personality she shows at school and public places

Why can’t we ever come together in the same place?

We’re too different, and we have been told to stay apart.

Comments

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[John Magness]

Apparently, you have written a pretty good two-voice poem. I assigned a two-voice poem in my English classes, and three separate groups plagiarized yours rather than write their own! =)

[Alicia Riley]

Hello!
I have an assignment to put together a collection of poems that I would use in my classroom. I was wondering if I could use this poem?
If so, does it have a title?

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Nice

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I would like to read your two voice poem to my ELA class. Does it have a title? You did an excellent job.

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Good job my son had to write a two voice poem and wanted to use yours..... Two thumbs up Honey!

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I love your poem. I am sure that many of us can see ourselves both in the blue and red sections, at the same time, no less! Aasa

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