I thought that writing a two voice poem was incredibly hard. My teacher wanted it to be deep and personal, but I'm not too much of a deep thinker, and I didn't really want to share my personal feelings with the outside world. This is more than I’d normally share, so be nice. These are my two personalities. The red is my “devil” side, and the blue is my “angel” side.
I'm a teacher's worst nightmare
I'm a teacher's dream
I'm bold, loud, and I love to tell jokes
I sit in the quiet company of my friends, usually reading a book
I'm a horrible procrastinator, waiting
for the last minute to finish anything
I promptly finish my work, making sure it's perfect
I'm vulgar, sarcastic, and rude
I'd never dream of saying anything the least bit mean
I'm like my room and my locker-
a total disaster
I make sure every detail is organized, down to the paper being in a neat stack
I have an opinion, and a good bit
of the time, it’s controversial
I never say what I think, because I know it never ends well
I sit on her left shoulder, whispering
what I think she should do with
a mischievous grin
I sit on her right shoulder, telling her to do the right thing
I was born from her rebellious side
I was raised her entire life, told to be perfect
I’m the personality she shares
with her friends and at home
I’m the personality she shows at school and public places
Why can’t we ever come together in the same place?
We’re too different, and we have been told to stay apart.
kyle's blog was a good one
Posted by: samantha | April 03, 2009 at 02:35 PM
Apparently, you have written a pretty good two-voice poem. I assigned a two-voice poem in my English classes, and three separate groups plagiarized yours rather than write their own! =)
Posted by: John Magness | April 14, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Hello!
I have an assignment to put together a collection of poems that I would use in my classroom. I was wondering if I could use this poem?
If so, does it have a title?
Posted by: Alicia Riley | May 01, 2010 at 03:20 PM
Nice
Posted by: hgu | May 15, 2011 at 10:46 PM
I would like to read your two voice poem to my ELA class. Does it have a title? You did an excellent job.
Posted by: Cheryl Morin | August 31, 2011 at 10:03 AM
Good job my son had to write a two voice poem and wanted to use yours..... Two thumbs up Honey!
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I love your poem. I am sure that many of us can see ourselves both in the blue and red sections, at the same time, no less! Aasa
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