Two-Voiced Poem

I want to talk and have fun.

                                   I am shy and quiet.

    COLORFULLY BLAND

I will do my school work later.

                           I am going to do my homework now.

I like to play video games.

                          Reading is my favorite pastime.

I don't care for what my parents have to say.

                                          Everything my parents say, I do.

I act differently anywhere I go.

                       I am the same everywhere I go.

     DANGEROUSLY SAFE

I am noticeable to everybody.

                       I am invisible to most people.

    NOTICEABLY INVISIBLE

I love the way I am.

                       I don't like who I am.

    NEW AGE HIPPIE

Comments

[shon15]

This is a great poem. This shows exactly who you are man. I hope that you feel noticeable becuase youre a cool guy. keep up the good work.

[shon15]

This is a great poem. This shows exactly who you are man. I hope that you feel noticeable becuase youre a cool guy. keep up the good work.

[Mary Ann Ricketson]

I really like the way you included the four phrases in your poem. If you could think of three more, you could have one after every two lines of your poem. How about ACTIVELY SILENT (for the video game/reading one) and REBELLIOUSLY OBEDIENT (for the one about what your parents say) and CONSCIOUSLY SELF-CONSCIOUS (for the one about acting differently everywhere you go). You could move DANGEROUSLY SAFE up under the one about homework. In any case, the poem works very well! Good job!
Ms. R.

[talikz 28]

wow this is so great. shows two kinds of people.. i would say that its the best..