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February 05, 2008

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shon15

This is a great poem. This shows exactly who you are man. I hope that you feel noticeable becuase youre a cool guy. keep up the good work.

shon15

This is a great poem. This shows exactly who you are man. I hope that you feel noticeable becuase youre a cool guy. keep up the good work.

Mary Ann Ricketson

I really like the way you included the four phrases in your poem. If you could think of three more, you could have one after every two lines of your poem. How about ACTIVELY SILENT (for the video game/reading one) and REBELLIOUSLY OBEDIENT (for the one about what your parents say) and CONSCIOUSLY SELF-CONSCIOUS (for the one about acting differently everywhere you go). You could move DANGEROUSLY SAFE up under the one about homework. In any case, the poem works very well! Good job!
Ms. R.

talikz 28

wow this is so great. shows two kinds of people.. i would say that its the best..

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