Web Worms
Look! What's that up on the tree? It's an ant. No. It's a bird. No. It's web worms. You can see them on trees building tents.They build ther tents on trees like maple,birhc,and elm.They form these tents around things there going to eat. They don't damage the tree with these tents.If they don't like the tents they will destroy them for no reason. You should try to find one of these amazing creatures!Would you like to keep one like a pet? Why or Why Not
I really like your title and opening lead - it sure caught my interest. I have to say that I would not want one for a pet because I have never thought of worms as a pet. They need to stay outside!
Good writing! I have one suggestion though. Be sure to leave a space between a period and your next sentence. What are other things you need to think about and check for after you finish writing? Share those thoughts with me. You are on your way to becoming a great writer!
Posted by: Mrs. Davis | December 01, 2004 at 08:03 PM
Thank you for helping me . That is good advice. I will like to write about diffrent kinds of animals.
Posted by: Jhonathan | December 02, 2004 at 09:01 AM