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This is the first version of my writing tip.
One of the tips is to grab the attention. It helps so the reader will attach to it. Add a idiom or act like your talking straight to them.This is one of the great tips.
Now this is the revised version of my tips.
Grab the readers attention like a puppy in a pound. The readers has to attach to your post like a fly. Add vivid vocabulary to your post. There's a lot of tips for you to know. This is just one of them.
I was looking around like a fly hunting food to get a story that has organization and word fluency. I guess I found it. The topic was clear and has details . They have used complete sentences . They used long and short sentences.
Wow I was like a dog scratching fleas because I heard about this. I heard that a man went around the world in three days. You also can find this in Time For Kids . This man didn't go to sleep for 67 hours and only drank milk shakes! He became the first person to ride solo around the world . I bet he's going for another super exciting adventure next.
One of the tips is to grab the attention. It helps so the reader will attach to it. Ad a idiom or act like your talking strait to them.This is one of the great tips.
Another tip is to have a good closing. Leave the reader hanged onto there sit. Add a question at the end so your reader would understand what you are talking about. Well I will gave you one more tip, but they are dozens more.
Now here's the last one. Use lots of details. You should inform your reader to what you are talking about. This would help you a lot with your writing. What tip would you give me?
I'm here at the weblogers stion. First up it is the Michle Jackson case. They havn't proven him guilty, but I think he didn't do it. The kid said that Michle Jackson didn't do anything to him. Some of the kids make fun of him for that. They searched his house and they found adult magazines. He showed up two times to court late. Second up the Nickoles Brian They finaly cought him. he killed three peaple and hold one hostage. A women called the police and they cought him.
This is a great tip from Tips For Young Writers
Re-write, re-write, re-write. Tear every sentence apart and analyze it. Does it flow? Is it passive or active? The best writers use an active writing voice as much as possible. So instead of saying: “She picked up the pencil,” say instead, “She grabbed the pencil.” Don’t sweat it if it seems to take a century to create something good, that’s how you learn. And with experience the writing process becomes easier. Promise.
I think this is a great tip. If you analize I bet you will be better in writing. If it seems to hard just think how better your writing is going to be. One of my tips is to put your voice into it. You can put a idiom or something that seems that it is talking to a reader.
This is one of the tales I made up in the Wacky Web Tales.
Dear Patrick,
Last week I helped solve a mystery and had a real hairy time. When it was lunchtime, I found out my red snake sandwich was missing.
I told Ms. Mahan and she said the whole class could help me find my snake sandwich. Ms. Meeler thought she found it, but it turned out to be a small chair. Marcos thought he found it, but it was someone's gross Juan. Finally, I found it under the car. It burp out when I opened my lunchbox.
Next time, I'm going to put my snake sandwich in a closed JH House Elementary School so I won't lose it.
Your friend,
Jhonathan
Wow that was so cool. Oh you there I"m talking about CNN. Since third grade we learned about the news because we watched CNN Student News at J.H.House Elementary School. We learn about things that are happening in the world. For example,we learned about the U.S.A presidential elections to the war in Iraq and to the ban of smoking in Italy. In fourth grade it increased. We discuss about it. Now in fifth grade we have a group about it and it is Web blog. We write about events and hear from many different people. One of the current events I found interesting was the tsunami and all those stories about the survivors.I wish this would be in Middle School next year. I hope this helped you understand the importance in weblog. Don't you want your student to learn more? Don't you want them to be informed citizens?And best of all they will become better writers.
Hi! This is Jhonathan reporting for duty from the Eagle Reporters. First up,Bin Laden Ads. The U.S.A is taking an approach towards catching al qaeda leader Osama Bin Laden and other terrorist. There's currently a 25 million dollar reward for information to bin Ladens capture.Wow! If I was Bin Laden I would be hiding. Personally I would like Bin Laden to get capture and never hurt anyone else.
Next up, Wal-Mart Labor Debate. The U.S. Department fined Wal-Mart 135 thousand dollars for having teenagers operate hazardous loading equipment.The government will give Wal-Mart 15 days prior notice of any Labor Department investigation into such matters. Well that's today news I hope you have a great day. From the Eagle Reporters I am here and out.
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