Jhonathan's Treehouse

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           Hi. What do you feel about testing? I think it challenges you. Some people  think it is boring. They are also  good things  about it. You do not have any homework after it. You get to go outside or watch a movie.  So next time  you  have a test think of the fun stuff afterwards.

Writing tips

1. Grab the readers attention by your lead. Like The Slimy Story. That will make your reader interested.
2. Use vivid words and phrases. That is like a Ball in football
3. Tell the reader a lot of your post.
4. Muse about what you wrote - I wonder, I think, I wish I knew, I think.
5. Ask  a thought- provoking question
6. To think a catchy title
7. Make a new paragraph if you have a new idea
8. Check Check Check Check it so you don't make  mistakes so they think a grown up wrote it.

     To be contiuned....

The Fantasy

         Two weeks ago we had to write a story. It was about anything we want. I wrote  a fantasy.

           This is the year 5010. Every human has turned into a black,hairy,scary monkey.  I was some how different. Instead of turning into a monkey I turned into a 11 year old child. I looked the same.Since I wasn't a monkey they tried to get me.  I stayed my hole day in a cave with spider webs in it. I hope the monkeys will leave. Day after day I stared outside to what I could of done. Finally one day I had it. I came out of the cave and got  a hole army of butterflies. Of course they have  a army too. We foght day after day. Then it stopped. Guess who won. The monkeys because The butterflies ran to the caves. I just ran. Then I suddenly changed to a monkey.