Lonely Dreams

Once upon a time there lived a little girl named Jessica. She lived in Los Angelas, California. Her parents never paid any of attention to her. They never cared what she wanted or didn't want They always made her do what they wanted and that was it. She always dreamed of becoming a famous singer. They always wanted her to be a teacher. The kind of singer she wanted to be wa an R&B singer. When she had an audition her parents never took to her to them, it was always her friend's mother.Her friend was always the one who encouraged her to become a singer She had an amazing vioce just like the birds chirping in the spring. She made all of the auditions and became the lead character in the school play. She love to be in plays just to sing the joyous music. Her parents never came to any of her plays, they always say that it wasn't important. Jessica always felt alone when her parents didn't come to her plays. Her parents would always say they had better things to do.When she was a littlle bit older a scout came to her school. After that she made it on BET and MTV they are both t.v. shows that shows lots of music videos. When they asked her what her parents thought about her singing, she would always say she didn't know because her parents never wanted her to become a singer. She also said she had to make her dream come true all by herself. She told them that she never got any of their blessings. Now that she is famous and completed her dream her parents regret anything that they ever said about singing.

Comments

[Lashley]

Maria,
What a beautiful story! I think a lot of people might feel like Jessica. Sometimes it can be hard when we want the ones we love to support us, and they do not. You did a wonderful job in telling the struggles and feelings within your story. It seems that you know a lot about singing, too. Could it be that a little bit of Jessica is you? Sometimes the best authors in the world will make characters like themselves. Great job!