Anni's Free Mind

How I can learn

I think that when people type to me it helps me because they can tell me my mistakes . Like if  I have trouble with possessive nouns or with prepositions they type things for me to do like tell them where the possessive noun(s) is or are. Then when I tell them that I understand it  they ask if I need them to help with anything else.  I can also help  my self by reading aloud . When I think every thing is perfact I ask a classmate at school ,or when I am home I ask my mom to read it for me. When she sees mistats she circles it for me and then I fix it.When I fix it I always think it's perfect but nothing is prefect.

Mountain Sight

There was a family that went on a camping trip. There kids wanted to go hiking to the top of a mountain so they decided that everyone would go. Before they left the kids packed food so they could stop and enjoy the nature. When they left they saw squirrel, birds, and flowers. They loved the flowers so much that they picked a couple. Their favorite one was the violet and velvet (smooth) one.

After a while of hiking they saw the most beautiful mountain they had ever seen, but they wondered how they will get there. When they got of the mountain their daughter Issabelle found a path through the pointy leaves. Then there was a family of wild burrs that got mad because they were on their territory. Luckily they had not eaten their picnic food .Then Gorge the son throw the food right then they started to run.   

Then they stopped running. The next thing they know they were at the top of the mountain . The daughter said what was the use of coming here if we couldn’t eat our picnic food . Then there mom put Isabelle’s head down and she saw the beautiful mountain sight. She changed her mind and said so I guess that we did not wast ourtime coming here . When they were leaving the two kids said that was the best trip ever.