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March 16, 2007

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Lani

Hi Anni,

I really like how you began by asking questions about this beautiful picture! That is a very effective way of engaging your reader!

The mirror effect is striking; it reminds of me of spring on a calm,sunny, warm day, when we walk at the wildlife preserve near our home. The lake is as clear as glass and it's so hard to tell the reflection from the real thing! BUT there are no mountains around here. And I'd love that additional feature.

Do you have scenes like this where you live?

Best,
Lani

anni

Dear Lani,
I do have a place like this.Me,my aunt,cousins, mom and sister go walking around our lake.Do you think you can draw or take a picture of your favorite place. Anni

Lani

Hi Anni,

Here's a picture from where we walk:
http://www.geaugaparkdistrict.org/images/Best_shore.jpg

And here's a picture from another favorite place, my dad's in Michigan:
http://www.cleveland.k12.oh.us/alliance/ritterla/gus.GIF

Do you like one better than another?
Best,
Lani

chris

I like your response to this photo, of a loch in the Bishop's Glen just up the road from where I live. Our water supply used to come from there, but not any more, so it's prettier than it was when there were pumping stations and such like round the water.

Blythe

Anni,

I think this is a lovely picture. I do wish that I were in the picture, sitting on the shore with a good book! This scene reminds me of a fun camping trip. I can almost hear the eagles crying and smell the sweet air. What does it remind you of? I think your descriptive words are perfect. I think other words that would fit are blissful, peace, preservation, and natural resources.

Blythe

Miss Kay

Annie,
I think it is a combination of both, a lake in the front and mountains the background. I think the picture is beautiful and calming. The first three thoughts that come to my mind are the smell of pine, the sound of birds and the breeze blowing. These come to mind because I just can picture myself in the middle of this and smelling the pine trees, hearing the birds chirp and feeling the breeze blow against my face. This picture is quite soothing, I have Spring break next week; I sure wish I was there!!!

Mrs. C

Hi Anni,

This post is well written but I find 3 small errors that could easily be corrected. Be sure to proofread and/or have a peer take a look. See if you can spot the errors and make corrections to have a perfect post! Keep up the good thinking that you are showing each session! I'm proud of that!

Mrs. C

Michael G.

Hello! I really like the way you put up pictures in your post and you ask the world questions. Not just any old question, but one that everyone wants to respond to. I think that this place is calming, chirping with birds, full of wildlife and releases all the pressure that has overtaken you. I think that this place is a nature reserve. Thank you for the idea of that. Come to my blog sometime. I'll make some of those posts and see what other people in the world think of it. Bye!

anni

Dear Mrs.C
Thank you I will try my best to do better next time.

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