This is my corrected story.
One time an old church’s windows sparkled through the wall like a rainbow.
If you go inside in that beautiful church you feel you’re in 1868. I will love to
go inside the colorful church but it’s a little scary because is kind of dark.
It does sparkle but the other side doesn’t, it looks like its haunted. I wonder if
the church is Jewish, Catholic, or Christian, and is a mysterious.
what I told my cousin and she said lets go to that place.
No way its
10 miles away’’ I said in surprise. 'O.K then I will go by myself’’ said myCousin Lisa.
I couldn’t believe it my own cousin is really going to the church.
know what to do and I never should of told her.
Then I quickly
told her parents what happened and we run to the car as fast we can.
half way and her dad told her to go inside the car.
‘Can we go
to the church,’’She said it like nothing has happened.
‘You’ll be in trouble
for one month Lisa’ said her dad in a very mad voice.
When they got home, Lisa said ‘I am very sorry what I did’’.
thoughtabout it for a min.''Okay then your not in trouble''said her parents. "Thanks and I know my cousin told you guys.'',said Lisa