One day a horrible storm was brewing waiting to release its wrath on the townspeople that ignored him. But one day the storm released its wrath. The people who lived on a cove got blew down like a stick. When the storm ended the only survivors were a man, a monkey, a soggy loaf of bread. 
The next day the man and the monkey had nothing to eat so they decided to eat the soggy loaf of bread. The man was so hungry that he cut the monkey’s tail and cooked the tail over a fire and ate it. The man remembered he had his cell phone so he called his friend who had a jet to pick him up from the cove.
Two hours later the jet comes to pick his friend up when suddenly BOOF BAM CRASH ERRRRR the jets engine blew up.” Commander were going down”, said the friend.” So much for our transportation”, said the man who called him two pick him up. So he stayed there with the monkey.
You are an awesome writer!!! Very good word usage. You should read Gary Paulsen's The Hatchet. It's about a thirteen year old boy who is left alone in the Canadian woods after a plane crash. You should check it out, it's a really good read! I would like to hear more about what happens to the main character. Does he ever get rescued?
Posted by: Ms. Best | November 15, 2006 at 01:02 PM
Goodness! I shall never feel the same about this spot again! I love your opening sentence - the personification of the storm. (ask your teacher about figures of speech)
Posted by: chris | November 19, 2006 at 07:02 PM
Ms.Best speaking of Hatchet.I already read it. I thought it was a great book.My teacher has read Brian's Hunt to the class.A couple of months ago I checked out Brian's Winter.It was an awesome book.I think all of Gary Paulsen are great.
Have you read Dork In Disguise?
Posted by: M.V. | November 28, 2006 at 10:05 AM
Chris, I have recently been learning about figurative language. Every time you comment you give me useful infomation. One reason I love blogging becaause your commenters give you information.
Posted by: M.V. | November 28, 2006 at 10:14 AM