" I Am "poem

I am sweet and kind

I wonder about the past

I hear a little crying sound

I see an imaginary baby unicorn

I want to visit Hawaii

I am sweet and kind

I pretend to be a princess

I feel special

I touch my imaginary friend

I worry about my brothers

I cry for something sad

I am sweet and kind

I understand math and reading

I say the truth

I dream about going to college

I try to be happy most of the time

I hope to visit my family in mexico soon

I am sweet and kind

Comments

[Lani]

Hi Rosalinda,

Welcome to blogging! I really enjoyed reading your nice poem in which you let your readers know a little about you!

You mention you dream about going to college; do you know what you would like to study?

Best,
Lani

[kate]

hey rosalinda
i like how you experssed yoursllf with words. they are verry meaningfull to me for example you said that you worry about my brothers that is sweet that you care so much about your sibbllings personally i have 2 sisters and no brothers. i am the middle child in a family of 5.
i like your blog keep up the good work
anyway you should chek out my blog

bii :P
www.tecka.learnerblogs.org

[Virtuous]

Rosalinda, after reading your post I was reminded of how important writing was to me growing up. I was thoroughly introduced to poem in the 6th grade. I had a creative writing teacher that came to my school once a week, can you believe that? Anyway, it was through my teacher that I learned that writing was a way to express how you feel. It didn’t matter how I was feeling at the moment, I could write about it. I could also write to entertain, inform, or persuade. I felt that your poem was informative, not with world history but with Rosalinda history.

As I read through your poem, I was able to see all of the things that made you sweet and kind. You provided a way for people to know you better. In your poem you wrote “I wonder about the past”. Have you ever considered writing a poem where each line started with the phrase “I wonder why?” You will be amazed about all the things in life that you find confusing or simply interesting. Continue to write. Write poems, short stories, and books. The power is in the pen and it will follow your command.

Virtuous

[Blythe]

Rosalinda,

I love your poem. It is so personal. You sound like a very nice person. What kind of art would make a nice companion piece to this poem? Maybe a collage of photographs of you growing up or a self-portrait would be appropriate. What kinds of thoughts went through your head while you were writing this poem? You should save this poem and look at it again in several years to see how you’ve changed and grown. Or maybe you could write an “I am” poem every five years and see how they change as you get older.

Blythe