When I listened to my recording it will help me to understand more of my writing. Others also will think my writing is more mysterious and it will help me to be more skillful in my writing. I also want people to be more curio[u]s about my writing. It would make me happy if I wouldn't make mistakes on my paper at all. My paper would sound even better if I added more action and better word choice to it. In some stories they could teach you knew things that they never knew before.