Hi and bye everybody this is MIA an almost 6 th grader. I'm here to tell Lani, Toni, Ms.C,A April, and every one else who as been commenting in my blog. Ya ll are so special to me. It is so hard to leave behind some thing you love so much.
GOOD-YBE FOR NOW MY FRIENDS
Dear 6th grade teacher,
My name is Mia. I'm 4"12" with brown hair. People say am a nice respectful girl. I hope you think that way too. I have one brother that goes to that middle school. My favorite color is pink. My favorite food is beet/cheese nachos. There are more things about me, but next year we will see each other and you'll know more about me.
I just can't wait until 6th grade. I think am ready to be a 6th grader. I'm not nervous now, but I think I'll get nervous when I get there. I'm still curious about middle school and my teacher and my new classmates. I sometimes wonder how would my teacher look like. How is she/he like .
Can't wait until next year.
LOVE,
MIA
How many times have you use the six traits of writing. A lot,a little,or all the time.Don't say never because whether you notice or not you are using your Six traits of writing even if you are not writing.
Well, the six traits of writing is one of our important keys. We always have to involve the six traits in every activity,post, or subject we are talking about.
There is six traits, Voice, Word choice,Organization, Ideas and Content,Sentence Fluency, and conventions.I use all these traits in my blog. I'll tell you how. I use Ideas and Contents by putting down my ideas on paper, that is the first thing we should all do before begging any other steps. I put my ideas on what I'm going to use on my new post.
Then I Organize my sentences in what order they are going to go in because I don't want my post to be all bounce.Next I use word choice so that my post will be vivid and exciting,not boring. Sometimes I mess with my tittles so that I can make them more outstanding. Just to get the readers attention.
After that I use Sentence Fluency. I want to make sure that all my sentences make sense or else how is my readers going to understand .Plus I don't want a robot's post.
When I finish with my sentence Fluency I use Voice. i check if I need to use enthusiasm or spice up my sentences. I check If I need to change periods into exclamations and exclamations into question marks.
After all that is finish, My last tool is Conventions. I try to make sure that, That would be my last weapon to use in my post. Usually there is a link that you can go to check if you spelled the word right.
Now you know that the Six Traits of writing is a very important key in our blogs. It is something we must have and learn when we begin a new post.
Too much comment and I can't think of my most favorite comment, but I have to make up my mind.
My most dearest comment was a comment that this person wrote after she was gone fore weeks............
Mrs. A comment really meant some thing for me because she was gone for a long time and I really missed here.Her comment was about the poems I had put on the blog.She told me that I have talent. That really made me feel good inside.
*mrs. A you better read this. It was a hard choice to chose my post favorite comment.
This blog is specifically for teachers middle grade teachers.
Why,why,why. Are you really wondering why Is why. Well, I'll tell you now.
You know what I have been learning so many things in fifth grade, and I don't even want to write nothing about school subject.There is something really important I would really love to write about. It really hit our class. It is blogging!
Blogging, Blogging,blogging that is all I want to write about. Middle school teachers my reason for writing this post is to persuade you to let us have blogging next your because trust me ,believe it or not but blogging does help student on there writing and stories. Why do I say this well we by writing posts and posts. We can look back on our old posts and we can ask our self question on how to make or writing better.
Also blogging makes you think out side the box.It makes you go beyond writing.and now you might now why I wrote this title.
I just learned a new word"BLETHER".
Blether : foolish, voluble talk
Blether is a word of foolish talk. Maybe it means that you chat, chat, chat, that you never know what your saying even if it sounds foolish.
I choose this tittle because your saying a sentence and it has the word blether in it , and you say, Say What? Cause you are wondering what in the world does blether mean.
Hi, April this is Mia answering to some of your question you provided for me.
Q:When you post, how do you get the ideas to post about your topic?
A: Well, Our teachers pick the post we are going to write about.Except for last Tuesday before the break she said we can write about what ever we want. I wrote about "Easter". Some times I write about the holiday or seasons.And I get my idea will I'm typing.
Q:What is your favorite or the most interesting thing you like about blogging?
A: What I like about blogging is getting the comments. I love getting comments. I'm just like you when I get comments, that what I like, but when I have to answer it that what I don't like.
Q:What makes you want to comment to a blog?
A: I like commenting blogs when their blogs are colorful and have interesting pictures and amazing story's and posts.
The bunny is coming, the bunny is coming. Everyone grab your basket and go outside. Look up, look down, look all around. Look in between bushes, uner rocks, or on the ground. Don't miss a spot or else they will be gone. By: Mia P.S. I made up this poem on the way. Here are some poems for you.
Secret Information
Would you like to know a secret?
Well, I'll tell you one I know:
The Easter's Bunny's coming,
My mama told me so.
He'll bring a basket filled with eggs
And leave it in my yard,
And I will find it Easter morn,
If I look very hard.
I shouldn't tell my secret,
But I think it should be shared.
You ought to know that Bunny's coming,
So you can be prepared!
Five Brown Eggs
Five brown eggs in a nest of hay,
One yellow chick popped out to play.
Four brown eggs in a nest of hay,
Another yellow chick cheep-cheeped Good day.
Three brown eggs in a nest of hay,
Crack went another one, Hip hooray.
Two brown eggs in a nest of hay,
One more chick pecked his shell away.
One brown egg in a nest of hay,
The last yellow chick popped out to say,
Happy Easter!
Patience
Chocolate Easter bunny
In a jelly bean nest,
I'm saving you for very last
Because I love you best.
I'll only take a nibble
From the tip of your ear
And one bite from the other side
So that you won't look queer.
Yum, you’re so delicious!
I didn't mean to eat
Your chocolate tail till Tuesday.
Oops! There go your feet!
I wonder how your back tastes
With all that chocolate hair.
I never thought your tummy
Was only filled with air!
Chocolate Easter bunny
In a jelly bean nest,
I'm saving you for very last
Because I love you best.
Bunnies
Bunnies are brown
Bunnies are white
Bunnies are always
An Easter delight.
Bunnies are cuddly
The large and the small.
But I like chocolate ones
The best of them all.
Easter
The Easter Bunny's feet
Go hop, hop, hop,
While his big pink ears
Go flop, flop, flop.
He is rushing on his way
To bring our eggs on Easter Day,
With a hop, flop, hop, flop, hop.
Five Baby Bunnies
Five baby bunnies hopping out to play,
Hopping in the forest on happy Easter Day.
The first baby bunny carried his new cane,
He twirled as he came hopping down the lane.
The second baby bunny came to the river's brink.
Tasted the cool water and took a long, long drink.
The third baby bunny tied her bonnet so new,
Under her chin, a bow of pink, white, and blue.
The fourth baby bunny skipped down the shady lane.
He opened his umbrella just in case of rain.
I am passionate about friends. I have to have friends or else I go crazy. I love when friends leason to me about problems I have. Friends to me are like family members and sisters. I have specail friends, favorte friends. Some times we have fight but that is the reason why we are friends. We tell each other secrets, boys we like, fmily problems and things we are good at. Friends are special charms. for my readers if you are reading this right now. If you want list some of your friend or BFFS. it might make some one happy.
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