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Leslie has moved to another school. We all miss her and wish her the best at her new school.  We hope to hear from her!

Jingle,Jingle

A Wacky Web Tale

Sing to the tune of “Jingle Bells.”

running through the woods
In a one-puppy open corvete,
Over the fields we go,
humming all the way.
dog on bob-tail ring,
Making spirits bright,
What fun it is to swimming and jogging
A sleighing song tonight!

Jingle cat, jingle cat,
Jingle all the way!
O what fun it is to jumping
In a one-puppy open corvete.
wow!

Jingle cat, jingle cat,
Jingle all the way!
O what fun it is to jumping
In a one-puppy open corvete.

My thank you

Angela, thank you for cheering me up and saying "I think story is very entertaining". Thank you for saying that it really made me happy and confident.

Chris, thank you for making me confident and saying "can I suggest you take you take a look at your direct speech" because now I know to read over my work.

Tina, thank you for saying "scary story's catch the readers attention" now i know to right more scary stories.

Mr.Jones thank you for saying that you like the way "I repeat I am unique and useful" it makes me know people believe in me.

Lani, thank you for "commenting to almost everyone of my comments"  it means alot to me that you would take you time and effort for me.

Michelle, thank you for saying that "i have a wonderful and thoughtful poem" it really encourages me to write more stories.

Mrs.C, thank you for saying "you write directly to your reader" it shows me that I can write to my reader when I try.

Thanks everybody for commenting.

  These is my corrected story.

Grace , Chelsea,  and  Carmine  are  going  to  a  feast  at   their  aunts    house. When they arrived their aunt gave them a dress to go put  on. They went upstairs to put them on. Then they found something so unusual that it is impossible to describe. There were not sure if they should go ask their aunt what it was or see for there self.

          They decided to go see for them self. While they were walking down the hallway they saw a door. When they went in the door they saw a whole different world. When they realized that they were grownups in that world they were shoked. They wanted to go home but when they looked back at the door there was somebody blocking it. They said we have a party to go to we need to go home. The boy said when you are in this world time does not pass by. Then Grace said “how come is this like a magic world”. The boy replied "Yes these are all witches and warlocks if the master sees you he will kill you". They said then let us go out of this world.

          Then the boy let them go out of the magic world he gave them each a necklace that would help them remember the world. When they went out of the hallway they were kids and the hallway was gone. They decided they would never take the necklaces off again.They new that the feast was beginning they went downstairs to see how it was going. They said it was an  adventure upstairs. But they never told why.

 

November 14, 2006 | Permalink | Comments (4)

How I know

     I think by listening to the recording it will help me because next time I write a post I know to reread my post aloud.When I started writing the story  I was  careless. But when I read it over I saw the mistakes and it made me realize that I really was being careless. I know that next time I will try to improve on my grammar.When the other person reads your work they will not understand what you are trying to say and that would not be good because what if it is something really really good and they don't understand it. It would make you feel good if they understood what you were trying to say. So read over your work and you might get the best comment ever. I know you would not want a 7th grader read your work and say "boy this person may need some help in writing".So I say the less mistakes the closer you are to getting your 100 in writing.

The Secret Hallway

        Grace , Chelsea,  and  Carmine  are  going  to  a  feast  at  the  their  aunts    house. When they arrived their aunt gave them a dress to go put them on. They went upstairs to put them on when they found something so unusual that it is impossible to describe. There were not sure if they should go ask their aunt what it was or see for there self

          They decided to go see for them self. While they were walking down the hallway they saw a door. When they went in the door they saw a whole different world. When they realized that they were grownups in that world. They wanted to go home but when they looked back at the door there was somebody blocking it. They said we have a party to go to we need to go home. The boy said when you are in this world time does not pass by. Then Grace said “how come is this like a magic world”. Yes these are all witches and warlocks if the master sees you he will kill you. They said then let us go out of this world

          Then the boy let them go out of the magic world he gave them each a necklace that would help them remember this world. When they went out of the hallway they were kids and the hallway was gone. They decided to never take the necklaces off ever again. They new that the feast was beginning they went downstairs to see how it was going they said it was an  adventure upstairs. But they never told why.

 

Technology's Back

Have you ever used technology? I have but it was very confusing. I think the first time I ever used the computer was in the first grade. I was learning math facts and my teacher told me to pick me to get on and do them.I felt really exited because she did not have to pick me to do the facts but she did.I think the first time i ever E mailed someone was in the  third grade. It was boring. I had fun using technology because I felt like a big girl. I sometimes don't like technology it takes forever to download. I like technology because research does not take that long to find. I really like technology but sometimes I can get mad.

I am poem

I am unique and useful

I   wonder about my future

I hear my moms voice

I see the ocean

I want it to  be christmas

I am unique and useful

I pretend I am my sister

I feel my brothers saddness

I touch the air above me

I worry about my younger life

I cry when I  remember

I am unique and useful

I understand the world

I say diffrent  things

I dream about angels

I try to be perfect

I hope people belive me

I am unique and useful

Meeting miley

          Emily Doveala is talking to Miley Cyrus about her  new Disney channel show Hannah Montana.  On October 26,2006 Emily wanted to know why,how,and when they made the show.  She asked Miley to come to Disney's Media Event  in New York  City.  Miley says "changing back and forth every 5 minutes may be hard but when I watch the tape it was worth it".Miley goes in disguise and puts on wigs and tons of makeup.At the end she has her friends,but she also has her secret life of being a rock star.

MEETING LESLIE

HI! My name is Leslie today is my first blog and luckily it happened to be

  To   you. It takes alot to learn about blogging you have to really want to do

This because if you don’t want to blog when you read it you would not be

Interested in it like if I wrote that you seem nice then that would not catch

  Your    attention. You   sound nice. BYE!!