A Snowy Day
A long time ago me and my brother almost died and this is the story. One day our family took a vacation to the snowy mountains. We were getting our cabin at the bottom of the hill from the owner. The owner tolled us to be careful because weired things been happening around mountain. So my mom, dad, and my oldest brother stayed at the cabin while Deon and I went snow boarding down the mountain.We took the sky lift to the top of the mountain. We were halfway up the hill when I looked down and it looked like my eyes w
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Wow, Patrick! You really had my attention! I hope you will finish this story. I think you are a good writer.
Posted by: Nancy McKeand | April 27, 2005 at 11:15 PM
That stroy sounds really exciting.I LIKE IT!!!What happens next?
Posted by: Gabriel | May 10, 2005 at 02:11 PM
That stroy sounds really exciting.I LIKE IT!!!What happens next?
Posted by: Gabriel | May 10, 2005 at 02:11 PM
I predict that I will soon finish my story I just don't know when.
Posted by: Patrick | May 12, 2005 at 09:46 AM
SNOWY Day Sounds worth it if it is a hot Day
Posted by: najai | May 12, 2005 at 01:56 PM