Today I read a news story on "Mount Saint Helens Acts Up". I found an example of each trait of writing.
Ideas and Content - The story has a very good idea and it sticks to the topic at all times the paper I clear and it comes alive. Organization - story explains how things happen in time order all the deatails are in sequence. That makes it easy to read. Sentence Fluency - I like how the author of the story sets up the sentences. They flow easily and sound good. Conventions - the writer uses a lot of punctuation to make things more interesting. Voice - the quotes from other people make the story have a voice in it. Word Choice - The author uses vivid words to make the story more dramatic and better. Ex: rumbling and scrambling.
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