A long time ago in a mystical and magical forest, a young tiger named Jazzimine and her three friends set out on an adventure they will soon never forget.
It was a rainy, cold, and boring day in the land of of Barrish Forrest.Jazzimine and her best friend Dinger were sitting over by the river bank.
"I wish my mother would let me go somewhere new", Dinger,the young wolf, exclaimed.
"Me too", Jazzimine,the striped tiger,replied. The two friends sat and talked for what seemed like hours when along came Macy and Bans.
"Hi guys, like my NEW, bright, rainbow colored coat?", Macy asked. She always got what she wanted, and when she didn't, she got mad. Even though she was a beautiful parrot, she sure could be a brat.
Now Bans on the other hand was a different story. He was a chubby monkey whom wasn't all that pretty. He was on the "nutty" side and, you'll never believe this, he went bananas over bananas!
That afternoon, without their parents knowing, the four friends went away from there magical home. Before they left, Jazzimine had to grab her flying blanket. After everyone was packed onto the blanket, the group flew off into the big blue sky.
They finally landed after a long 21 hours, and thought the trip would be a safe, but the dangers were right under their noses. The adventure was coming to an end after they had seen Rubi Rino and Frankie Bull Frog.
They soon came upon Cobra King. "Where are you kids going?", King hissed.,
"Were headed back to Barrish Forrest", Jazzimine replied as she wondered why he had asked.
"Well", King started,"Here's a shortcut. Pass the temple, go around the stone wall, go across the swamp, and there will be a path leading you straight home!!!"
The animal kids were almost passing when all of a sudden, they felt themselves being lifted up off the ground!!! They had been captured!!!
Four gorrails came and brought them into the temple. Inside, they saw KING!!!!!!
"Now give me your blanket or you'll never go home again", King hissed.
"We will never give it up!", Dinger cried.
"Fine, then I will have to throw you into the river along with your friends", King yawned and soon fell asleep.
That night, Jazzimine had an idea. "I'll put out my claw and use it as a key."(they had been locked in a room. She did so and the four friends were free!!! She woke up Dinger, then Bans, and finally Macy. The young animals gathered onto the blanket and flew off, back to their magical home.
shelby,
Your story was great. I loved it so much.You really know how to write good stories all right.well bye.
Posted by: Taylor | April 25, 2005 at 01:50 PM
That was a great story! You must really like to write! I hope you will continue to write stories and share them with us all.
Posted by: Nancy McKeand | April 27, 2005 at 11:20 PM
This makes me feel like I am a really good blogger. I LOVE hearing from people who like my writing. Thank you everyone for supporting my writing!!!
Posted by: Shelby | May 05, 2005 at 08:41 AM
Dear Shelby,
I really enjoyed your story! I absoutley loved it! Well that's all! BYE!
Posted by: Jordan Rustad | February 28, 2006 at 10:49 AM