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Mrs. Davis

You picked a very fascinating topic. What happened to your title? Go back and proofread and make corrections as I see a few mistakes that I know you will catch! Read it out loud and see if it makes sense. You really bumped your vocabulary up when you used the word perils. That is a better word than dangers. Good work!

What is the number 1 thing you feel you need to focus on to become a better writer? You are working hard and your effort is appreciated. Keep it up!

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