labrador Jake and his  hander PC Alison Dawson have made 28 arrests over is two years on the force,and he's always very popular.Jake's e-mail adress will be a useful tool to educate youngsters about the perils of substance abuse."Jake. Was  donated to Drham police by a former officer and was just had his drug detection licence renewed for another year.he can becontacted online by e-mailing [email protected].

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[Mrs. Davis]

You picked a very fascinating topic. What happened to your title? Go back and proofread and make corrections as I see a few mistakes that I know you will catch! Read it out loud and see if it makes sense. You really bumped your vocabulary up when you used the word perils. That is a better word than dangers. Good work!

What is the number 1 thing you feel you need to focus on to become a better writer? You are working hard and your effort is appreciated. Keep it up!