The 6 Traits of writing

I just finished reading a story called "Too Young To Work" . After I read it I noticed it had the 6 traits of writing. The 6 traits of writing are idea and content, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, and conventions.      

This questions you should ask.                                          

1.Ideas and content - Does my idea go with the title? Does it make sense?

2.Organization - Is everything in order? Is it where I wanted it to be?

3. Voice - Did I say what I wanted? Is it in my own words? Does it make sense?

4.Word choice - Did my wods make sense? Did I use descriptive words?

5.Sentence Fluency- Did my sentences sound complete? Are my sentences able to be read?

6. Conventions- Are my words spelled right? Does my paper make sense?

               I found some of that in the story I read.

Comments

[Anna]

Hi! I judt wanted to say! I totaly agree, how you write a fablous story! Thankes for you help for me to write a better story! Allright! Thankes! Bye!