Sometimes my17 year old sister and I fight tooth and nail over stupid little things When my mom buds in she tries to scratch the surface.When we go crazy and hit the roof.When that happens we try to forgive eachother and straiten up and fly right. Sence my sister is older I sometimes throw in the towel. Sometimes its just a feather in the cap to bring us back to normal.
Hi! what i meant was when she gets involved and tries to solve the problem
Posted by: Amber | April 29, 2004 at 09:20 AM
Hi!!! Amber, your story was good, but you forgot to put space between some words. I also did not understand sentences number two[When my mom buds in she tries to scratch the surface. VERY GOOD!
Posted by: yoceline | February 19, 2004 at 09:53 AM
Hi Amber,
You have come up with a good idea for your idiom story but you have lots of careless errors. Be SURE to proofread. Check punctuation and flow. Be sure to make the idioms stand out by underlining or making them bold. You will do much better on your second draft. Good writers always proofread their work!! I'm glad you have joined our group.
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Amber | February 19, 2004 at 06:54 AM