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Hi! what i meant was when she gets involved and tries to solve the problem


Hi!!! Amber, your story was good, but you forgot to put space between some words. I also did not understand sentences number two[When my mom buds in she tries to scratch the surface. VERY GOOD!


Hi Amber,
You have come up with a good idea for your idiom story but you have lots of careless errors. Be SURE to proofread. Check punctuation and flow. Be sure to make the idioms stand out by underlining or making them bold. You will do much better on your second draft. Good writers always proofread their work!! I'm glad you have joined our group.
Mrs. Davis

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