I like to teach other children because it inspires me to teach other people what I already know. I like to help Claudia when she needs help. I also teach a lot of other children too. Mrs. C. Jones class is a lot of fun. I like to chack the childrens' folder to see if they did their homework. It's like I'm the teacher. It makes me feel well. Because I like to help and it makes me happy that I know something that they don't know about. I want to teach that I know. It makes me feel like a teacher or a romodel. That's why I sometimes don't want to go to school but then I remember that the children might need help. That's why i like to help people. They also teach me a lot of things too. When their is no work to do we play tons. I might become a teacher when I grow up like Mrs. Davis.
Hi Angelica it's me Derrick. You teach 1st graders to read, write, arthmatics, and more. That is great Angelica. But i saw a mistake in your paragraph
Your friend,
Derrick
Posted by: Derrick | March 25, 2004 at 09:42 AM
Your writing was good, but not great. I say that because there are quite a few mistakes. There were many spelling errors, and common mistakes. An example of one of your spelling errors is in the sentence, It makes me feel like a teacher or a romodel, romodel is suppose to be role model. Or, in the sentence, It makes me feel well, good would be a better word, but for good, you can bump it up. Remember to read it over, and let other people read it. Your writing will change a lot! Well, I know you have just recently joined, but shape it up a little, and it will be great!
Posted by: Anne Davis | March 25, 2004 at 10:00 AM
Thankyou for the comment Derrick!
Posted by: Anne Davis | April 01, 2004 at 09:19 AM
Thankyou for the comment who ever you are?
Posted by: Anne Davis | April 01, 2004 at 09:20 AM