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Derrick

Hi Angelica it's me Derrick. You teach 1st graders to read, write, arthmatics, and more. That is great Angelica. But i saw a mistake in your paragraph

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Derrick

Anne Davis

Your writing was good, but not great. I say that because there are quite a few mistakes. There were many spelling errors, and common mistakes. An example of one of your spelling errors is in the sentence, It makes me feel like a teacher or a romodel, romodel is suppose to be role model. Or, in the sentence, It makes me feel well, good would be a better word, but for good, you can bump it up. Remember to read it over, and let other people read it. Your writing will change a lot! Well, I know you have just recently joined, but shape it up a little, and it will be great!

Anne Davis

Thankyou for the comment Derrick!

Anne Davis

Thankyou for the comment who ever you are?

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