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I think that you give supper advice. I am one to just get to the point as well. It becames boring and draining to read material that has filler information that is not needed. Another TIP for you to think about is always declaring what the subject is in a sentence. Never use "it", "he", or "she" if you have not specified the subject in the sentence. Your are welcome to have fun and visit my blog at www.alliedapple.blogspot.com


You are really starting to understand the writing process. I was impressed with your blog and how much insight you have on this topic. Writing for pleasure is a wonderful outlet and I hope as you mature, you will enjoy it as much as I do.


Claire, I like your tips. I will chech out the website over the weekend.


Jane, I am glad that you think my writing is getting better.

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