Fixing Tips

       Pretend you are writing to a very important person. That is a tip I wrote. Yet, I have to bump it up, as my teacher Mrs. Davis says.   Maybe I should write a tip that says, Act like you are writng to your role model! Never be shy when it comes to writing! I like my revised version better. How about you?

Comments

[Anna]

Hey! I just wanna say! I liked your beginning of your whole blogg! Allright.. Time to say Good-bye! Bye Bye!

[Ashley]

Thank you.

[Kelly]

I like how you used different colors to emphasize your post and what you wanted to get across. What a great idea to think about writing to your role model when you’re writing- I’ll have to try that! I completely agree with you about never being shy when it comes to your writing. You can say whatever you want when you write…but with that opportunity comes a lot of responsibility! We can accomplish great things with great writing.