Today I read a story from TFK and I found some sentences that shwo the six traits of writing.
The tombs of the pharaohs who ruled in ancient times are among Egypt' s most scared treasures. I think Ideas and Contents go with that sentence.
In the story it shows Organization because it tells about everything in different paragraphs.
For Word Choice the words in the story most scared treasures, sarcophagus, Ramses VI, pharaohs, and Egyptian king are very interresting.
There are ten nice and long sentences and that shows Sentence Fluency.
In the story the title talks about a king and so does the story. That is a Convention.
Hiyas I don't know if u ment to color ur works but i think it looks really cool!!! c ya bi
Posted by: Danielle | April 13, 2005 at 11:49 PM
I colored the words because those are the important words.
Posted by: Ashley | May 05, 2005 at 08:45 AM