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      I read a tip from Tips For Young Writers.

Tip 3: Chop it out! Sometimes things are better left unsaid. Always check your work to be sure every word has a place and slash the ones that stick out.

       I think it means like when you give too much information, people might get bored.   It gives the same information over and over again. It can sometimes be too wordy.

           Here is some tips I made: Tip 1: Always use higher level thinking words from Bloom's Taxonomy and use vivid words.

       Tip 2: Don't copy the same word over and over again.

        Tip 3: Revise your work before reading in front of a audience.

         Tip 4: Use your voice in your writing.

         Tip 5: Don't write about something that bores you. It is important to enjoy your own writing.

Posted by Ashley House on March 17, 2005 at 09:39 AM in Words to Ponder | Permalink | Comments (4)

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  1.      Shelby is full of beans when she is with her friends and everyone likes to be around her.
  2.      Mrs. Mateling takes the cake for teacher of the year.
  3.      In Fall it was raining cats dogs.
  4.      Patrick is not feeling on top of the world today.
  5.      Babysitting for Dorothea is a gravy train.
  6.      Life is a dog-eat-dog world these days.
  7.      Luke had an ace up his sleeve in Language Arts.
  8.      In blogging you wear your heart on your sleeve.
  9.      For me math is a shot in the arm.
  10.      Juan needs to hold his horses for lunch.
  11.      I raised Mrs. Davis's eyebrow when I did extra work.

Posted by Ashley House on January 06, 2005 at 10:03 AM in Words to Ponder | Permalink | Comments (1)

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