2004 ELECTIONS
The representatives are really taking the bull by the horns in the 2004 elections and primary elections . Republican party is really waiting for the elections and they aren't having primaries , but the Democrats are. Republican party is really going to throw caution to the wind in these up coming elections . What do you think of the democrats and their representatives for the 2004 votes? John Kerry is so far, he's in the lead . But Gepeart, Leiberman , and Dean are washing their hands of something . Dean said that he will drop out if he loses another primary.
Derrick, you have picked a very good topic. I see careless errors that you could have corrected with proofreading - get in that habit! One suggestion - "John Kerry is so far, he's in the lead." If you had read this out loud I bet you would have immediately figured out that you were missing a word or a few words. What do you think those words are? You are such a good thinker! You keep working and you will be such a good writer!
Posted by: Derrick | February 12, 2004 at 02:55 PM
Derrik, I think that you have a good story, but in some parts I didn't understand what you meant like the part you said that they were washing their hands of something. Could you add to that part to make it more specific. Keep up the good work!
Posted by: Jerry | February 19, 2004 at 09:51 AM
Thanks for the flattering comment. I don't think I really think all that well, but on Thursdays and Fridays I think extra!?! LOL!!!
Thanks!
Posted by: Derrick | February 19, 2004 at 09:58 AM
Hello Derrick. SuperThinker here, visiting your top dog blog once again! I'm like John Kerry more and more each day. I think he has some good ideas for our country. Thanks for this post--you really took the bull by the horns to inform your readers!
Posted by: SuperThinker | February 19, 2004 at 11:21 PM
Hi Derrick. Thanks for your comment about California. How did you know that California has more counties than Georgia? Did you use an almanac? You have a great blog!
Posted by: Ms.P | February 19, 2004 at 11:54 PM
Hi Derrick! I liked how you used your idioms in your story. Maybe you can add more detail about why the Republican party is throwing caution to the wind. Anyway it's the cats pajamas!
Posted by: Jennifer | March 04, 2004 at 10:48 AM