In the High Schoolers' blogs, there were many reviews that contained interesting information. All of the reviews contained many pieces of information I have not thought about and others I have heard before and use all the time. These are very useful to use in writing so that your posts almost sound like books!
Devin's comment on Matt's site was one of my favorite though. Enticing the reader, grabbing the reader's attention, and using great leads. Some of my favorite Writing tactics.
Mallory's comment on Dana's site is interesting also. Mallory said that Dana was very passionate about the subject she was writing about. My teacher, Mrs.Mateling, always says that you have to be passionate about learning until you truly learn. I really agree with Mrs.Mateling, you really do!
Through their posts, I have learned many important lessons. There was one that really stood out though; you can never be absolutely perfect at something. You can always improve.
Hellooooooo Emily! It is I, SuperThinker, your friendly neighborhood superhero blogger who's always tickled pink when reading your blog! Well, well, well my friend. What can I say about your writing other than to tell you that your writing style just gets better and better with each post. As a matter of fact, your writing has developed so much that I'd like to offer you the opportunity to write a post for my blog, BlogHeads. Here's my idea: I'd like to have you write a post as a guest blogger telling other students about two things 1)why you like blogging and 2)what writing tactics you think are important in a good post (interesting lead, quotes, etc...). You can send it to me via email and I will post it on BlogHeads! What do you think of that Miss Up-and-coming-writer!?! (I'm buzzing with excitement!)
Posted by: SuperThinker | March 17, 2004 at 01:00 PM
WOWWW! You want me to write a story by those guidelines? SURE!!!!! I'll be totally up to the challenge!!! YIPPEEEE!!!!! And me, Miss up-and-coming-writer! Aw shucks..... ^-^ I'll love to write that for your wonderful blog! (buzzing so hard with excitement I'm vibrating)
Posted by: Emily | March 18, 2004 at 09:53 AM
Emily your writng is wonderful I love it!
Posted by: jacquelinewr | March 18, 2004 at 09:59 AM
Emily your writng is wonderful I love it!By:Angelica Villanueva
Posted by: jacquelinewr | March 18, 2004 at 10:00 AM
Thanks Angelica! You love it? WOPEE!!!
Posted by: Emily | April 29, 2004 at 09:53 AM