The unnormal b-day!!!!!

The Haunted Tower Read your tale.

One afternoon Jonathan and Shelby were walking down a goofy trail, looking for kindling for their campfire. The trees were crazy and green, and there were colorful wildflowers all around. Jonathan and Shelby began to pick the wildflowers, and after a while, they hiked so far that they had wandered away from the trail. It started to get dark. Jonathan began to get worried, but Shelby seemed excited to have an adventure. "Look!" Shelby said. "Do you see that chicken? It looks like a house!" "We're saved!" cried Jonathan, who was relieved. Once they got closer, Jonathan felt very uneasy again. It didn't look like the cozy little cottage Jonathan had been imagining, but rather a big, spooky tower! It was about 900,000,000,000 feet tall, and it was covered with lime green ivy and moss. It was the creepiest thing Jonathan had ever seen! Jonathan said, "Shelby, let's keep walking! There's no way I'm going into that tower! It looks haunted!" "Don't be such a snake! We're going in. I think it looks perfectly un-haunted!" said Shelby. Jonathan was so scared that he could not open his eyes. He felt his legs chatter as Shelby opened the door. All of a sudden, Jonathan felt that he was not alone. He opened his eyes, prepared to see the worst. But instead, he saw all his friends and family inside the haunted tower! "Surprise! Happy birthday, Jonathan!" they all punshed.

Comments

[Lacey]

That is really funny!!!!!!!

[Estefany Vega Mendez]

Thank you lacey I'm glad that you like it!

[brynne]

that was really funny and awsome i bet jonathan was really scared and, i have a question did you know about the suprise party or no?