I like how Mallory expressed another person's writing by saying "also one thing that I'm particularly impressed with the fact that Dana truly picked a topic that I think she's passionate about". She could of said I like the how Dana said so and so''.
I also think that Claries comments on Mallory's site are real cool because she is saying why she likes it. Lot of people like hearing what other people think.
I think Devin's comments on Jess's site are really good, because it tells you what he and his classmates think about the comment.
I liked all the comments because they explain why they like it and they put on the comments real good vocabulary.
Hi Jacqueline--it is I, SuperThinker, your friendly neighborhood superhero blogger. I just read your post about students commenting on each other's blogs. It is very well written. I like that you tell your readers why you liked certain comments. Your first part, about how Mallory expressed her thoughts, is very clear and that makes it a good strong beginning. Your writing has really developed! Keep up the good work, Jacqueline and I'll blog ya later!
Posted by: SuperThinker | March 17, 2004 at 12:15 PM
(Hola SuperThinker)I really have tried to make my writting better , because at the begining of the year at wasn't trying that much as I'am right now.Thank you for the comment I really liked it.Well, write you later
Posted by: Jacqueline | March 18, 2004 at 09:51 AM