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Hi Jacqueline--it is I, SuperThinker, your friendly neighborhood superhero blogger. I just read your post about students commenting on each other's blogs. It is very well written. I like that you tell your readers why you liked certain comments. Your first part, about how Mallory expressed her thoughts, is very clear and that makes it a good strong beginning. Your writing has really developed! Keep up the good work, Jacqueline and I'll blog ya later!


(Hola SuperThinker)I really have tried to make my writting better , because at the begining of the year at wasn't trying that much as I'am right now.Thank you for the comment I really liked it.Well, write you later

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