This Pro Bowl game had me on my toes. I was so excited it seemed like had ants in my pants. The AFC had a ace up their sleeves when they brought out the Co-MVP player, I'm glad that the camera guy didn't gum up the works while the game was on. Most of the people who attended the game were from four cormers of the earth. This season the football players got a kick out of playing this Pro Bowl game. Who do you think had a bed of roses?
Hi Jerry!
This is a very good draft. You have shown such good thinking and the story does flow. My suggestion is that you work a little on the ending so we understand your use of "bed of roses." I am proud of you!
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Yoceline | February 18, 2004 at 10:34 PM
Jerry, Great Job! But,try to add more details or more facts. To make the audience understand why for example you were on your toes try to add more details to understand why. But the rest is excellent keep up the good work!
Posted by: Angelica | February 19, 2004 at 09:48 AM
Jerry, Great Job! But,try to add more details or more facts. To make the audience understand why for example you were on your toes try to add more details to understand why. But the rest is excellent keep up the good work!
Posted by: Angelica | February 19, 2004 at 09:48 AM
Ms.Davis, Thank you for your wonderful comment. I will try to make my ending alot more specific so you can understand more what I meant by bed of roses. See Ya!
Posted by: Jerry | February 19, 2004 at 10:08 AM
Angelica, Thankyou for your comment on my idiom story. I will try my best to put more detail in my story. See Ya!
Posted by: Jerry | February 19, 2004 at 10:24 AM
Hi Jerry:
Youre right. The California is by the Pacific Ocean. The water is cold. Is the Atlantic Ocean warm?
Sandra
Posted by: student | February 19, 2004 at 10:48 PM
Hi Jerry - SuperThinker here paying a visit to your blog. Well, if you had ants in your pants then you really must have gotten a kick out of the game. As for my superblogging self--I sure do get a kick out of your writing!
Posted by: SuperThinker | February 19, 2004 at 11:34 PM
Thanks you Mrs.Davis for your wonderful comment. When I had put ''bed of roses'' I kind of didn't understand what it meant until I kept going over the definition over and over again.Well its been nice talking to you. See Ya!
Posted by: Jerry | April 01, 2004 at 09:32 AM
Thanks Super Think for your wonderful comment. I really did get a kick out the game and out of writing too. Well its been nice talking to you. See Ya!
Posted by: Jerry | April 01, 2004 at 09:38 AM