This is a great tip from Tips For Young Writers
Re-write, re-write, re-write. Tear every sentence apart and analyze it. Does it flow? Is it passive or active? The best writers use an active writing voice as much as possible. So instead of saying: “She picked up the pencil,” say instead, “She grabbed the pencil.” Don’t sweat it if it seems to take a century to create something good, that’s how you learn. And with experience the writing process becomes easier. Promise.
I think this is a great tip. If you analize I bet you will be better in writing. If it seems to hard just think how better your writing is going to be. One of my tips is to put your voice into it. You can put a idiom or something that seems that it is talking to a reader.
Dear Jhonatan,
I just read your tip about writing, and I loved your suggestion. Having your voice reflected in your writing gives it so much power and life. I am just impressed by your thoughts. Keep up the good work!
Posted by: Alex | March 17, 2005 at 01:31 PM
Jhonny you realy think about tips. I am proud of you.Those tips are great.Some people should follow them!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Angelica | April 20, 2005 at 01:56 PM
I try to make my writing better every day by adding details and excitement to my sentences. Some people take time to realize what they are doing. I think that what you said is write and that everybody should know.
Posted by: darion | February 17, 2006 at 01:50 PM