This is the first version of my writing tip.
One of the tips is to grab the attention. It helps so the reader will attach to it. Add a idiom or act like your talking straight to them.This is one of the great tips.
Now this is the revised version of my tips.
Grab the readers attention like a puppy in a pound. The readers has to attach to your post like a fly. Add vivid vocabulary to your post. There's a lot of tips for you to know. This is just one of them.
Jhonathan, I think your revised tip is much more powerful and persuasive. I'm going to have my students visit your blog to learn how to better craft their writing.
Posted by: Susan Sedro | April 13, 2005 at 09:59 AM
Thank you. You really think its more powerful. Well I going to think how I can make my tips better do you have any suggestions.
Posted by: Jhonathan | May 05, 2005 at 09:04 AM