Jhonathan's Treehouse

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           Hi. What do you feel about testing? I think it challenges you. Some people  think it is boring. They are also  good things  about it. You do not have any homework after it. You get to go outside or watch a movie.  So next time  you  have a test think of the fun stuff afterwards.

Writing tips

1. Grab the readers attention by your lead. Like The Slimy Story. That will make your reader interested.
2. Use vivid words and phrases. That is like a Ball in football
3. Tell the reader a lot of your post.
4. Muse about what you wrote - I wonder, I think, I wish I knew, I think.
5. Ask  a thought- provoking question
6. To think a catchy title
7. Make a new paragraph if you have a new idea
8. Check Check Check Check it so you don't make  mistakes so they think a grown up wrote it.

     To be contiuned....

Revise Tip

This is the first version of my writing tip.

One of the tips is to grab the attention. It helps so the reader will attach to it. Add a idiom or act like your  talking straight to them.This is one of the great tips.

Now this is the revised version of my tips.

Grab the readers attention like a puppy in  a pound. The readers has to attach to  your   post  like a fly. Add   vivid vocabulary to your  post. There's a lot of tips for you to know. This is just one of them.

Tips

              One of the tips is to grab the attention. It helps so the reader will attach to it. Ad a idiom or act like your  talking strait to them.This is one of the great tips.

Another tip is to have  a good closing. Leave the reader hanged onto there sit. Add a  question at the end so your  reader would understand what you are talking about. Well  I will gave you one more tip, but they are dozens more.

Now here's the last one. Use lots of details. You should inform your reader to what you are talking  about. This would help you a lot with your writing. What tip would you give me?

The Report

I'm here at the weblogers  stion. First up it is the Michle Jackson case. They havn't proven him guilty, but I think he didn't do it. The kid said that Michle Jackson didn't do anything to him. Some of the kids make fun of him for that. They searched his house and they found adult magazines. He showed up two times to court late.        Second up the Nickoles Brian They finaly cought him. he killed three peaple and hold one hostage. A women called the police and they cought him.

Good Tips

This is a great tip from  Tips For Young Writers

Re-write, re-write, re-write. Tear every sentence apart and analyze it. Does it flow? Is it passive or active? The best writers use an active writing voice as much as possible. So instead of saying: “She picked up the pencil,” say instead, “She grabbed the pencil.” Don’t sweat it if it seems to take a century to create something good, that’s how you learn. And with experience the writing process becomes easier. Promise.

   I think this is a great tip. If you analize I bet you  will be better in writing. If it  seems to hard just think how better your writing is going to be. One of my tips is to put your voice into it. You  can put a idiom or something that seems that it is talking to a reader.

Becoming a Better Citizens

                 Wow that was so cool. Oh you there I"m talking about CNN. Since third grade we learned about the news because we watched CNN Student News at J.H.House Elementary School. We learn about things that are happening in the world.  For example,we learned about the U.S.A presidential elections to the war in Iraq and to the ban of smoking in Italy. In fourth grade it increased.  We discuss about it. Now in fifth grade we have a group about it and it is Web blog. We write about events and hear from many different people. One of the current events I found interesting was the tsunami and all those stories about the survivors.I wish this would be in Middle School next year. I hope this helped you understand the importance in weblog. Don't you want your student to learn more? Don't you want them to  be informed citizens?And  best of all they will become better writers.

The Great Lesson Plan

In this lesson plan by Rodney , students conduct internet research on the two Washingtons and are asked a series of questions about each. The questions encourage students to consider the differences in the two Washingtons, that one is a city and the other a state, that they are on opposite sides of the nation, that they are many miles apart, etc,

AW my brain hurts becuase of Rodney's lesson plan is so great. I like it because, they get to ask  a series of questions.That is a good lesson plans. Please read Rodney's blog because his is intresting and  you might learn somthing.

My Favorite Post

In the beginning of class we opened the internet and responded to the comments in our weblog. We got lots of comments. I was like a dog scratching its collar and started writing like lightning back to the comments. Mrs. Davis went to open our class weblog. Then we went to the weblogs and we picked our favorite post. Then she went to word. She put the email address of the GSU students. Then she showed us how to make a link to that weblog.

This is my favorite weblog from Addie Blog

I thought the blog I read was very sweet. The student was so excited to be sharing her ideas with me. She had a great outlook on learning and teachers. She made me feel very excited about becoming a teacher. Her main advice was to make learning fun. I totally agree. Fun in the classroom has been one of my personal missions. She was very encouraging. I think that blogging is a good way of engaging the students.

Yes I think so too. It is so exciting. It really likes my teacher. She is so funny and she understands us. That is the teacher I like. 

Dear Teacher To Be

                                       Hi.  My name is Jhonathan. This is my opinion of how a teacher should be. They should have respect for their children. They should  let their children to speak freely. They should help the child if they are left behind. They should do activities to help the children  learn better.You should let them play outside  at least every Friday

Let me give you an example like  the time Mrs. Davis made us act out Be Calm At All Sports Events.  That  helps me know the Blooms Taxonomy. It means Knowledge, Comprehension, Application,Analysis,Synthesis, and Evaluation. I always remember what it means because I act it out. We acted like we were rude but, then we acted like angels.