Juan's Weblog Center

Last Post

This is our last post. I really don't like to say good-by that much because I won't have to see my friends anymore. The school year is about to end. I had an extraordinary time spending time with my teacher Mrs. Davis. She made a weblogging web that trapped us like a spider web. Her mind transformed me to be a blogger. It was amazing. We changed our thoughts and personal voice. It zapped me like it was a dream but it was real. I never thought that my teacher would choose me to be a blogger it has and always will change my life.   

My YEAR IN WEBBLOG

Hey,Hey,Hey. I really had an excellent year blogging with all my other bloggers. We only need one more week to post in our blogg. We all made it to the end of our assignment. This was so important to me because it has improved my writing ever since I was put into this amazing world. I feel that I have changed over the past year. It was so fun meeting everyone here. Each one has inspired me to change my thoughts and feelings. I learned that you should never think wrong about a bad comment and always have your own personal thoughts. I wish people could use webblogg forever. What would you wish for? 

Testing post

Do you like testing? Cause this year at J. H. House the students here had to take the CRCT Test and some of them said it was hard because some of the questions in the test were some of them they hadn't even studied. I would like to interview some of these students but I would do it if Mrs. Davis lets me. I would like to listened to the  different opinions that the students have in mind. What do you think about testing?            

Bloging Tips...

1. When you make a new post it will grab the readers attention in the beginning of a sentence
2. Use vivid vocabulary in your strongest form and express your writing
3. Take pride in your writing like proof reading and using the ABC spell checker
4. Place strong words in the beginning of you sentences

                                                                                        To be continued.

I would like to try that some time

Two weeks ago Mrs. Davis gave us a chance to wright about anything we want. This is my story.

I would like to sky dive out of an airplane. Most of the people think it is dangerous. Others don't. Before you sky dive you would have to wear protective gear and a parachute. Would you like to sky dive? If you didn't wear any protective gear you might fall and die. The most important gear of all is the parachute. The parachute is shaped like a hot air balloon it's what keeps you flying in the air. The parachute can only be used by one person. There is also a competition held in Central Park, New York City. It begins in April. There are only 9 competitors. Whoever hits the red target wins.

Revised Tip

This was my previous tip that I made and now I'm going to pump it up.   
                               
Juan -  My last writing tip is to have your own personal voice. Express your personality and have a conversation with an authur and try not to make your story so  boring that no one will like to read it. When I mean your own personal voice I mean showing expression on your writing and honoring your punctuation ,meaning to slow down on your writing. Don't let anyone judge you about your writing and be proud of what you wrote about.

This is my revised version,

My last writing tip is to have your own personal voice. Express your personality and have a conversation with an authur and to try not to make the story you wrote boring so that no one will ever read your writing. When I'm talking about your personal voice I mean showing expression in your writing and don't forget to honor your punctuation, meaning to slow down and to stop and rest in your punctuation. Don't let nobody make fun or judge your writing. Be proud of what you  write about and the only one who can be proud of it is you.      

Amazing Mars

Have you heard about the amazing Mars project?  Well if you haven't you're in luck. I read a story in a magazine called Time For Kids.     I was reading a story like I said and then something immediately caught my attention. It was a story about the rovers that are still in Mars. They have found some intriguing facts. There is  some microscopic dots that are from minerals of water and a crater that has been shaped by flood waters. A few weeks after they landed on mars they started working. Both of the rovers dug holes in the soil and in rocks sending data back to Earth about there findings. Lets hope that we will find information about the The RED PLANET.     My story had organization because it tells you what happened in order  and what the rovers are doing.

Three Good Tips

          One of the writing tips I learned so far in my class is my handwriting. In my class my teacher Ms. Mahan told me to improve in my handwriting and if I were to take a test and my handwriting was messy I would get some of the answers wrong. I would have been embarrassed and feel miserable.   Another writing tip is your punctuation. I always forgot which punctuation to use in my writing and never understood the meaning of the punctuation. Each punctuation is different and each has a different meaning.   My last writing tip is to have your own personal voice. Express your personality and have a conversation with an authur and try not to make your story so  boring that no one will like to read it. When I mean your own personal voice I mean showing expression on your writing and honoring your punctuation meaning to slow down on your writing. Don't let anyone judge you about your writing and be proud of what you wrote about.      

Brian Nickols Captured

Good mornig, Juan here reporting for the Webloging Center. Just then Brian Nickols was just on trial. He was thrown in jail then  esscaped. He grabed  an officers gun and ran to the court and shoot the juged then killed 3 officers and 1 agent later that night. HE ran for a reporter to get his car then hit him in the head and took the subway to Marrieta and was found in Sunday in a department    

The Wacky Tales

Today I went to this website called Wacky Website and created this post . I hpoe you enjoy this post.

Hooray! Summer is finally here, and that means we can go to the beach! Today, my family is going to Savannah Beach, and I can bring a friend with me. I decide to invite my best friend Isabel. I know Isabel will want to go with us. She thinks going to the beach is doom ! We start our beach day by watching the sunrise, and then eating breakfast at Uncle Marcos's Pancake Hut. I always get stinky jelly beans flavored pancakes. After breakfast we ride the waves, go crawling for seashells, and crying a sandcastle. Then we eat the lunch we packed for the beach. It's my favorite — shrimp sandwiches. The only time shrimp sandwiches are not so hairy is when you drop them in the sand. By 8:00, everyone's had enough of the beach. But Savannah Beach is fun at night, too! There is a really tiny boardwalk. It's always crowded with people. Would you believe we saw my teacher Ms. Mahan there, eating a huge banana split? There are a lot of cool shops on the boardwalk. You can get a little hermit dodo, but make sure your mom and dad say it's OK! My favorite store is the jewelry store. Isabel and I each bought a rope bracelet that will shine when you get it wet. Pretty big! By 8:00, we're all ready to head home. I usually fall asleep on the ride home. I can't wait to go to Savannah Beach again.