Do you know about the missing explosives? Well they found out they were missing. They thought someone was guarding it and they found out it wasn’t guarded. They think it was stolen on April or March
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Now you have made me quite curious! Where were these missing explosives? Who are "they" that you mention in your story? You have the makings of a good story but remember you always need to think of the 5 W's - who, what, where, when and why. Answer those for your readers! Keep on working hard and your writing will improve! What steps do you think you need to take to be a better writer?
Posted by: Mrs. Davis | December 01, 2004 at 08:00 PM
Ms.Davis thank you for helping me have your advise of the 5-W's. I have never thought of that. I can't belive that I couldn't thike I could try my best but I will.Thanks for the advice
Posted by: juan | December 02, 2004 at 09:01 AM
I can not beleive that no one was guarding explosives. Who would steal explosives? I guess somebody like Saddam.
Posted by: ashley | December 02, 2004 at 10:23 AM
Thanks for writting back to me. Who would not be gureding the explosises.would you?
Posted by: Juan | January 06, 2005 at 09:27 AM