The Fair

The fair is the most exciting place to be.You can eat cotton candy.I love to ride the farris wheel. My dad wants to play all the games, but I want to ride the rest of the crazy,fun and exciting rides. I love the binky lights. The time blinks by like summer vacation. I go to the fair every year,but not this year because I forgot to bring some of my homework home.That is why I think the fair is so exciting!

Comments

[Ms. Meeler]

I used to love going to the fair too. Now I get a little motion sick riding all those rides. I wonder why people start feeling motion sickness when they get older. Who do you think designs all those cool rides like the ferris wheel and scrambler? Would you like to design these one day when you get older? Do you think kids can design rides for the fair?

[Mrs. Davis]

I have wonderful memories of eating pink cotton candy at fairs. Yum! I'm sorry you missed the fair this year but I bet you will keep up with that homework from now on, right? I think roller coaster rides are exhilarating! Can you think of three fantastic adjectives that would describe things at a fair? Use them in sentences when you comment back. Good adjectives make for great writing!

[Lacey]

I think people get sick because their immune system get weaker as they get older!