Re-write, re-write, and re-write. Tear every sentence apart and analyze it. Does it flow? Is it passive or active? The best writers use an active writing voice as much as possible. So instead of saying: “She picked up the pencil,” say instead, “She grabbed the pencil.” Don’t sweat it if it seems to take a century to create something good, that’s how you learn. And with experience the writing process becomes easier. Promise.
I think that is a great tip, because we children hate to re-write, re-write, and re-write. We like to things aside till the last minute. As she said grab the pencil don’t pick up the pencil! You should do what your told when to you’re told to! So you won’t have to worry about weather or not you have done it.
Hi, Lacey! Don't worry. Children are not the only ones who hate re-writing and putting things off until the last minute. So I think your writing tip applies even to adults. I think that you gave very good advice! Hopefully, many people will take your advice and learn that writing does come easier with practice. Well, good luck in the future with your writing and hope to talk to you later.
Posted by: Crystal | March 17, 2005 at 01:23 PM
Thank you for the comment!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Lacey | March 24, 2005 at 08:42 AM
Those are good witing tips.
Posted by: Layne | April 26, 2005 at 01:54 PM
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Posted by: Lacey | May 05, 2005 at 08:42 AM