Luz's Writing Corner

Thinking and Writing Possibilites

     Today  in class we had a discussion from Mrs. Davis about her post. We talk about what we were going to do today in class. She told us that she has been reading some posts from weblogs of  her friends. This week  she said that she wants us to think about what we want to write in our weblogs.   She said that we have been improving  in our vocabulary.  I think  that she is right because I know I am using new words. I see that Yoceline writes very good  in her homework. For her homework she wrote a very good poem and  everybody  did too. I think that what I wrote did not make a lot of sense. It is very hard when I first started to find what  to write  but then I got help and it was not too hard at all. My mom helps  me a lot and know I am going to write it  all  by myself.

Where I Am From

I  am writing about where I am  from....

I'm from cheerful friends and people who share what they know.

I'm from traditions and tasty food.

I'm from many, many friends who I help and they help me.

I'm from a beautiful family that I love and who loves me.

My First Post

My name is  Luz .  This is my first  time to be in this group . I am  learrning  to get in my new  weblog.  I am happy because  had never  had one before. I love the way that it looks because it is cool.

Note from Luz's teacher:

Luz is a member of a group of fifth graders (ESL and native-English speaking) who are using weblogs to become better writers. The class weblog is Thinking & Writing Wrinkles.

The server for the blog where this site was originally hosted has become unstable. This blog has been transfered from manila software to typepad software so some transfers may not look as well as the original site did but the content written by Luz remains the same.

Mrs. Anne Davis
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