My story about weblogs

Have you heard about weblogs?  I am  going  to tell you about my experince.On Thursday our teacher chose me to be in the weblog group I  was  amazed! Mrs. Davis told us about weblogs. We talked about using vivid words. I have a little tiny problem with it, but we have practiced. I pondered about it for a little, and I came up with some good  ones. I  have trouble with organization and thought provoking questions. I felt that the audience wasn't going to read my blog. I thought that this was going to be a super awesome  year. I'm also trying  to make my paragraphs  longer. I  try to put as many vivid words as I can. We also have choices about we were going to write about that made things easier for me. Weblogs have made me a  better writer. I have a voice in the internet and people can read what I think. I think weblogs should be written by everyone because people can make a better writer out of themselves. Mrs. Davis gives us tips such as comment starters like- this made me think about,or I wonder why. Mrs. Davis is an excellent teacher she never gives up on us. She has never yelled at us. Would you want to be a weblogger?   Why or why not?