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Nancy McKeand

I hope that you will find a way to continue blogging. It has been fun for me to read your posts here, and I will miss them.


I absolutely loved reading your story about the trip to Egypt. I was expecting a boring story about seeing pyramids and drinking tea in an Egyptian Cafe. I knew I was in for a surprise when the chocolate tank showed up and shot a gumball at the travelers. Wow! Then, when Juan popped out of the tank with glowing blue candy, I knew I was in for some real fantastic story telling. Your story reminds me of Alice in Wonderland but without all the tedious word play that slows that book down. Keep up the writing. You seem to have an amazing imagination - and your dialogue is not bad either.


I am sorry this is your last post. Also I am sad you won't see your teacher anymore. I stink at writing. Overall I liked your other posts also.

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