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Tips for Weblogs

     Here are some helpfull tips for when you're weblogging. First, don't be discouraged if you get a bad comment just move on. The important thing is you're happy with what you wrote.

Second, make sure your writing makes since. First draft ,to be contiuned.

The Adventure

Two weeks ago we got to choose our on topic to write about it. I chose a fantasy. Well hear it goes. 

    "Yes, yes, yes," I shouted at the top of my lungs. I had won three tickets to Egypt. I took two of friends Johny and Alejandro. A big yellow airport van came and picked us up. When we arrived at the big, blue, low rider plane Johny fell into a trashcan. "Help," Johny exclaimed. We got him out, but he smelled like a dead fish.

  The plane was about to leave  us , but we got on in the nick of time. Johny still smelled like dead fish,  and had to seat at the back. "Oh no," Johny yelled. "What's wrong now," we asked. "I forgot my Hot Cheetos," Johny said. "Here I got a bag," said Alejandro. "Oh one more thing you need to take a bath," Alejandro replied.

   After six long hours of traveling we arrived. All we saw was sand and more sand. "Okay, I'm bored," Johny complained. "Oh quit your belly aching," we screamed. We waited for three hours for the taxi to come and pick us up.

     Then we heard a rumble from behind. It was a huge chocolate tank. It shot a gumball at the taxi. We ran as fast as we could. We followed the tank to a huge palace. We went into the palace.

   Then we saw the tank going down a stairway. We followed it. The we saw a room full of candy. The top of the tank opened and a boy came out of it. It was Juan with a glowing blue piece of candy. He put it in a tomb that said Two Ton Candy. Then Juan turned 50 feet tall. All the candy was sticking to him and he turned into candy.

  He saw us and chased us  into a prison. We were trapped when Johny began eating Hot Cheetos and became 50 feet tall. "Give us some," we told Johny. "Okay here," he said. We turned 50 feet tall too. Juan saw us and shut us with gumballs. Then Johny started  glowing  like the Hot Cheetos and we started to do the same too.

  We quickly melted Juan into goo and ran outside. We began to recover our normal size. We told all the children of Egypt to come to the palace and take some candy. We took some too. When we got  back to the U.S. everybody asked us about our journey. So we told everybody.

Burper Boy

This morning I went to this site called Wacky Web Tales.  I got to create my own one here it goes .I hope you enjoy it.

Burper Boy had everything a T-Rex could ask for. He had gross food, a big, cool bed, and the Mendez family to look after him. One morning Burper Boy woke up. "I'm hungry!" he said. He went down to the 11, but everyone in the Mendez family was still asleep. "I guess I'll have to find my own breakfast," he said. Burper Boy went outside and puked down the street. On the sidewalk, he saw a humungus animal. "Gulp!" Down went the animal. "Not bad!" said Burper Boy. Next, Burper Boy headed for the park. There he found a pair of scales just sitting on a bench. "Gulp! Gulp." Down went the scales. "Mmmm, super intelligent!" said Burper Boy. Burper Boy was feeling very doom as he skipped over to a video store. There he saw some tasty video games. "Gulp! Gulp! Gulp!" Burper Boy swallowed True crimes streets of L.A. and WWe DAY Of Reckoning whole. "Holy Mercifull Jelly Beans! It must be time to go home," said Burper Boy. He scrambled back home and up the stairs to his cool bed. "Breakfast! Time for breakfast, Burper Boy!" called Mrs. Mendez. "I don't feel very well," groaned Burper Boy. "It must have been those spaghetti's I ate for supper last night." Burp!