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Bang! Bang! choo- choo train common girl lets c your thang!!! Just a joke!
I predict that your selection will get a lot of comments because I think that u put in a lot of effort into your writing!!
Let it roll!!!


Mrs. Davis

Wow! I really made some pictures in my head with this story. It held my attention! You used good descriptive words. Be sure to proof though as I found a few errors. Can you be a sleuth and find them and tell me what they were?


I know, that needs to stop. My mom once had a little crash and she was freaked out, but she was o.k. I wish there was some way to stop it.


I would say that is a wierd experience, too.I hope that does not happen to me!

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