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The Saddest Moment Ever!

     Where were you when the world stopped turning for moments and moments? The 9/11 attack is still going on for heart-broken people. Investigators are still searching for clues. It is still changing  America. It happened so suddenly we didn't know what to do. Many people were crying, praying, and at churches praying and crying for the people who lost their loved ones. Those are some things abut 9/11 that are still going on.
     9/11 is bringing problems to the cabinets. Intelligence are trying to make a bill of 9/11, but they are meeting up with roadblocks. The Conservative Republicans say that the bill needed more work. So it stopped the bill from becoming a vote for the House of Representatives. The bill was for the recommendation of 9/11 Commission. It was to stop future terrorist attacks. It was made by Republicans and Democrats, 9/11 Commisson and also President Bush. Those are some facts about problems for the Cabinets.
     The Commission has many recommenations for America. The commisson found out that the U.S wasn't ready for terrorists. The commision is helping the government with 41 recommendations. It is laid out in 2 secions: "What to Do" and "How to do it". The Comission wants to show the world America's values. They also want to express American values in countries where terrorists live. They plan on doing that by broadcasting freedom on television and also giving countries money for education programs. They want to give universal rules to check systems. They want the world to fight terrorists together. They say that CIA and FBI didn't give much information before Septemeber 11. They want systems to give information together and give the same kind of report. Those are some recommendations of the commision.
     The Congress has mahy reactions to the recommendations. The Senate of South Dakota hope for quick actions to the recommendations. He said put security first. The 88 Congressional Committees oversee the Homeland Security Department. The Commission plans to keep speakjng about the recommendations to Congress. Those are some reactions that the Congress had.
     The 9/11 attack was a saddest moment yet. We will always remember the people who died. We will always also give respect to the people who lost their loved ones. The paragarphs above tell about the 9/11 attacks.

Recall some facts about the 9/11 attacks.

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