Anni's Free Mind

My thank from me to you

The first person that  I will thank is Lani because she heped me with prepositions . And my favorite post was when she made me look for the prepositions.

Emmy is aslo very helpful and nice because she worries about things like world war3 . And she was the first one to blog to my poem.

Mrs.A has posted that I have trouble with homophones I will start to study them alot more.My blogs will start to look better when I finish studying them.

to be continued ...........

Mountian Sight Revision

This is the real deal, final copy , I think it is my best work ever.

 

There was a family that went on a camping trip. Their kids wanted to go hiking to the top of a mountain so they decided that everyone would go. Before they left the kids packed food so they could stop and enjoy the nature. When they left they saw squirrels, birds, and flowers. They loved the flowers so much that they picked a couple of each. Their favorite one was the violet and velvet (smooth) one.

After a while of hiking they saw the most beautiful mountain they had ever seen, but they wondered how they will get there. When they got off the mountain that they were on, their daughter Isabelle found a path through the pointy leaves. They saw that there was a family of wild burrs that got mad because they were on their territory. Luckily they had not eaten their picnic food .Then George ,the son threw the food then they started to run to the most beautiful mountian.   

Then they stopped running. The next thing they know they were at the top of the mountain . The daughter said "what was the use of coming here if we couldn't’t eat our picnic food" . Then their mom put Isabelle’s head down and she saw the beautiful mountain sight. She changed her mind and said ''So I guess that we did not wast our time coming here ''. When they were leaving the two kids said "that was the best trip ever". Isabelle and George said that they wanted to go to another trip like that. Then when they got to the cabin they drank water and started to talk about how tired and scared they got . The next thing you know they where fast asleep.

 

Photo Courtesy of Chris

This is the real deal, final copy , I think it is my best work ever.

 

There was a family that went on a camping trip. Their kids wanted to go hiking to the top of a mountain so they decided that everyone would go. Before they left the kids packed food so they could stop and enjoy the nature. When they left they saw squirrels, birds, and flowers. They loved the flowers so much that they picked a couple of each. Their favorite one was the violet and velvet (smooth) one.

After a while of hiking they saw the most beautiful mountain they had ever seen, but they wondered how they will get there. When they got off the mountain that they were on, their daughter Isabelle found a path through the pointy leaves. They saw that there was a family of wild burrs that got mad because they were on their territory. Luckily they had not eaten their picnic food .Then George ,the son threw the food then they started to run to the most beautiful mountian.   

Then they stopped running. The next thing they know they were at the top of the mountain . The daughter said "what was the use of coming here if we couldn't’t eat our picnic food" . Then their mom put Isabelle’s head down and she saw the beautiful mountain sight. She changed her mind and said ''So I guess that we did not wast our time coming here ''. When they were leaving the two kids said "that was the best trip ever". Isabelle and George said that they wanted to go to another trip like that. Then when they got to the cabin they drank water and started to talk about how tired and scared they got . The next thing you know they where fast asleep.

 

Photo Courtesy of Chris