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mY THANK YOU COMMENT

I'm thanking to everybody who comment me and I'm so glad people really did. The first person I'm thanking to is Lani you said alot of nice comments and I 'm glad you liked my story's. Did you know your were the first person to blog me?

The next person was realy special to me and her name is Ms. Best. I  think you tried your best in every thing too and I 'm very glad your glad to be a Latino. I 'm Latino and I'm very happy about my culture too.

Finlay is some one who tells the truth if she liked it or not. Chris I know you didn't understand my story is just I couldn't think what to write. I promise I will do a better story next time. Do you think writing is hard?. I' m giong to keep trying my best in blogging.

This is my corrected story.

One time an old church’s windows sparkled through the wall like a rainbow.

If you go inside in that beautiful church you feel you’re in 1868. I will love to

go inside the colorful church but it’s a little scary because is kind of dark.

It does sparkle but the other side doesn’t, it looks like its haunted. I wonder if

the church is Jewish, Catholic, or Christian, and is a mysterious.

No That’s

what I told my cousin and she said lets go to that place.

No way its

10 miles away’’ I said in surprise. 'O.K then I will go by myself’’ said myCousin Lisa.

I couldn’t believe it my own cousin is really going to the church.

I didn’t

know what to do and I never should of told her.

Then I quickly

told her parents what happened and we run to the car as fast we can.

She gone

half way and her dad told her to go inside the car.

‘Can we go

to the church,’’She said it like nothing has happened.

‘You’ll be in trouble

for one month Lisa’ said her dad in a very mad voice.

         When they got home, Lisa said ‘I am very sorry what I did’’.

Her parents

thoughtabout it for a min.''Okay then your not in trouble''said her parents. "Thanks and I know my cousin told you guys.'',said Lisa

This is my corrected story.

One time an old church’s windows sparkled through the wall like a rainbow.

If you go inside in that beautiful church you feel you’re in 1868. I will love to

go inside the colorful church but it’s a little scary because is kind of dark.

It does sparkle but the other side doesn’t, it looks like its haunted. I wonder if

the church is Jewish, Catholic, or Christian, and is a mysterious.

No That’s

what I told my cousin and she said lets go to that place.

No way its

10 miles away’’ I said in surprise. 'O.K then I will go by myself’’ said myCousin Lisa.

I couldn’t believe it my own cousin is really going to the church.

I didn’t

know what to do and I never should of told her.

Then I quickly

told her parents what happened and we run to the car as fast we can.

She gone

half way and her dad told her to go inside the car.

‘Can we go

to the church,’’She said it like nothing has happened.

‘You’ll be in trouble

for one month Lisa’ said her dad in a very mad voice.

         When they got home, Lisa said ‘I am very sorry what I did’’.

Her parents

thoughtabout it for a min.''Okay then your not in trouble''said her parents. "Thanks and I know my cousin told you guys.'',said Lisa

Learnig new stuff

I learned how to blog to people and I 'm getting better at writing. I love reading and sometimes I hate writing.I love reading scary and funny books. I still have some problems, but in the future I will get better.Nobody is perfect so that's why I don't worry.

The wonderful place

One time an old church’s windows sparkled through the wall like a rainbow.

If you go inside in that beautiful church you feel you’re in 1868. I will love to

go inside the colorful church but it’s a little scary because is kind of dark.

It does sparkle but the other side doesn’t, it looks like its haunted. I wonder if

the church is Jewish, catholic, or Christian and is a mysterious church.

                That’s what I told my cousin and she said lets go to that place. ‘No

way its 10 miles away’’ I said in surprise. O.K then I will go by myself’’ said my

Cousin Lisa. I couldn’t believe it my own cousin is really going to the church. I

didn’t know what to do and I never should of told her. Then I quickly told her parents

What happened and we run to the car as fast we can. She gone half way and her dad told

her to go inside the car. ‘Can we go to the church,’’She said it like nothing has happened.

‘You’ll be in trouble for one month Lisa’ said her dad in a very mad voice.

         When we got home, Lisa said ‘I am very sorry what I did’’. Her parents thought

about it for a min.'' Okay then your not in trouble''said her parents. ''Thanks and I know my cousin told you guys.''

300 million people

   by  Thomas Hawk 

In 1915  100  million   people  lived in  America  and 1967  200 million   people lived in U.S.  President Lyndon Johnson celebrated the baby that made 200 million and they couldn't believe it. Today it hit 300 million people but they say the estimate is wrong.  Some say that is some where close. They might be 400 million people  live in U.S. Non-Latino people will be the majority,but not much. About 25% are going to be Latinos,14% African,and7% Asian of total group.

Learn from Dulce Maria

We are having alot of fun blogging and I think everybody should try typing it's really fun.

It use to be hard but its easy now and I will never forget about this. People might

still having be trouble about what to write in the compter. Blogging helps you get better in writting so you should study more.Do you think writting is hard why or why not?

"I Am" poem

I am kind and sweet.

I wonder if I'm going to college.

I hear mermaids yell.

I see my cat alive again.

I am kind and sweet.

Meeting Dulce Maria

Hi my name is Dulce Maria and I'm really glad that I'm going to blog other countries or other states.