I will let you now what I learned

When I  came to fifth grade I learned how to  multiply one number digits.  It was kind of hard but fun.I started to guess the answers but then I got the hang of it.

The  Boston tea party was-funny to me how about you ?What I liked about it was that they dumped the tea over the ocean.  I started to laugh at it. I  f inally understood what it was about.What do you think I need to improve on my writing.

Comments

[Mrs. A]

Cena, what did you mean at first you had to guess when you started multiplying? Have you started multiplying 2 or 3 digit numbers? What tips can you give someone who is learning how to do that?

[Ms. L]

Cena,
You have so much to say; do not be afraid to take your time to write it out. People want to hear what you have to say, and they will wait or read patiently until you are finished. In this particular entry, you had three different topics all packed together.
If you want to improve your writing, then think of your topics like sitting in the back seat of a car with too many people. You all get along better when you have more room, right? Your topics are the same way - they tend to run together when they do not have enough room. I think that you have a lot to say, which is great!! Take a deep breath, and write your heart out - everyone is listening!

[Ashlee]

I do think it is funny.I mean they proberly didn't like the tea. Hey, i could even be NASTY. YUKity YUCK YUCK

[stefan]

well cena"champ of champs" i don't think you need to improve on your hand writing i think it is great