I kind of made 2 mistakes, I forgot to put the word "that" in front of "were" in the beginning and put the $ in the wrong place in the middle and nobody saw that error[s] in the writing. So I thought the writing had no mishaps until I heard the pod cast. And on my next story I won't make the same mistakes. Angela suggested I should make the sequel to the story and that inspired me to do it.
Look forward to reading the sequel ... ;-)
Posted by: chris | November 29, 2006 at 05:44 AM
nice blog
Posted by: dog eats pie | November 30, 2006 at 09:11 AM
It was ultra lord very very funny
Posted by: _________________________ | November 30, 2006 at 09:15 AM
Hi Michael,
Your reflection is very well written. When you used three different words to describe slip ups: mistakes, errors, and mishaps -- that helped to keep my interest.
Are you using a thesaurus to help you with your word choice or is this your very own brain talking?
Best,
Lani
Posted by: Lani | December 04, 2006 at 02:32 PM
___________, It is a very funny story and did you read the sequal?
Posted by: michael | March 20, 2007 at 09:55 AM
It is actually both , lani. I like the encloclopedia because it said somethingabout legos. They are my favorite toys (besides animals).
Posted by: michael | March 20, 2007 at 09:57 AM
dogs eat pies, I think that if you like fight of the monkeys you should read the seqal.
Posted by: michael | March 20, 2007 at 09:59 AM
chris I now have the sequal in my march post. I hope you like it o:)
Posted by: michael | March 20, 2007 at 10:00 AM