Horror Story Of Doom

              My friend Levi and I were skating down hill when it started to rain. The lighting flashed and the thunder boomed. A spooky ruined mansion appeared in front of us out of nowhere. Levi and I took off our skates and ran into the mansion to get out of the rain. We were shocked when we closed the front door and a piano came to life and played spooky music.  In the center, I saw a giant box. suddenly, out popped a lot of ghosts!  We heard the front door lock behind us.

    Left alone in darkness, Levi and I flashed our flashlights. Then the ghost froze in place. We turned off our flashlights and the ghost moved again. I then saw a vortex in the box  and a giant teddy bear  flew out of it.

   The teddy bear was twenty feet tall. His fur was glowing green and his eyes were bright red.  His teeth looked like shark teeth and he had broken chains hanging off his arms.  He grabbed  the box and trapped every ghost in the room.  Then,  it trapped us and jumped in the box itself.

    We were in a giant box dimension. The inside of the box was as big as the mansion. It was glowing black and the bear blew up into fuzz. we got out safe and the place fell down as we ran away.

   

Comments

[Lani]

Hi Michael,

Oh my goodness, you are good with scary stories!

Your first paragraph really pulls your reader to continue reading. I was right there with you, hearing the thunder, seeing the lightning, and hearing the piano and the door lock.

How did you come up with the story? Do you use parts of your video games, or what you've read in books, or from your imagination?

Best,
Lani

[michael]

Lani, the ideas were from all three places. the masion from a game. the ghost from a book and the rest from imagination.

[juan]

Michael, I had a scary day too.It all starts like this, when we were outside It was dark and suddenly I heard a noise behind the bushes and I was so brave to open the bushes. When I open it, it was a rat and it ran away. Finally i went in and watched tv.

[juan]

Michael, I had a scary day too.It all starts like this, when i was outside It was dark and suddenly I heard a noise behind the bushes and I was so brave to open the bushes. When I open it, it was a rat and it ran away. Finally i went in and watched tv.